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If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reason and specific examples to support your answer.

 

I am very satisfied about my hometown without traffic jam.

These days, a lot of new apartments are built in my hometown. I think traffic jam is a consequence of new apartments.

Now, let me explain why I think so.

 

First, the population is increased from new resident. Similarly, a number of cars are increased too. So, these cars make a traffic jam. The rush hour for people are the same, therefore traffic jam is appears.

 

Second, a present road is planed few years ago and the plan is not changed. The road was scheduled in small city. As one might expect, now road is not for my hometown.

In conclusion this present road is too complex.

 

If I had an opportunity to change, I would want to change the road more widely.

If this suggestion is accepted, there is no doubt that traffic jam problem will be solve.